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All that needs to be say had been said so I’ll just add one more thing: This novel feels like someone writing about their college day in some random faculty flexing about how they can still act confident and happy. Author is pushing his narrative about outlook and attitude so much when he is writing a goddamn action novel. This is literally him fantasizing his college days which could work but the sad attempt at integrating fantasy elements like attributes was done so little that its even worse. MC also apparently “knows” everything about this novel and youre telling me theres not ONE goddarn thing he could use to make sh*t ton of money or make himself super strong? Is there no stocks market there or secret pills recipe or something? Jesus christ just write a college drama if youre gonna write it like this.