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The word "sword" is repeated so many times, what the f*ck lol. I swear it's like every second line and is mind numbing.Let's hope the writing gets better as the premise isn't bad at all.*chapter 3-4What the f*ck is going on, how does anyone follow what's happening, so lost.*Okay the cross dressing, when it first happened and how it happened I found it hilarious... that was until I realised he'd be doing this for a long time... So It's not bad but it's not good either, still a fun story though. Last comment I'll add - the only major qualm I have is that the author repeats himself way too much, words, phrases it's a little mind numbing so it makes you skip text a lot. But because it's pretty funny and interesting it's rating is anywhere between 4.0 - 4.5