Starchild Escapes Arranged Marriage Chapter 3 Discussion

  • #1
The word "sword" is repeated so many times, what the f*ck lol. I swear it's like every second line and is mind numbing.

Let's hope the writing gets better as the premise isn't bad at all.

*chapter 3-4

What the f*ck is going on, how does anyone follow what's happening, so lost.

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Okay the cross dressing, when it first happened and how it happened I found it hilarious... that was until I realised he'd be doing this for a long time... So It's not bad but it's not good either, still a fun story though.

Last comment I'll add - the only major qualm I have is that the author repeats himself way too much, words, phrases it's a little mind numbing so it makes you skip text a lot.

But because it's pretty funny and interesting it's rating is anywhere between 4.0 - 4.5
 
  • #3
Arghhh I don’t think i’ve ever feel as excited as this when a new novel been released!!!
 
  • #4
This is the first book in the series! It is a really captivating read, that will leave you wanting more! Fallon is a strong willed she wolf who is determined to be a warrior in the 6 pack! And Gray is an Alpha who loves to put her in her place! … open the book you won’t be disappointed
 
  • #6
i really love the story.. and will keep on waiting for the precious bond...
 
  • #7
I thoroughly enjoyed the entirety of this book. The story is gripping, there’s a lot of adult content (and it is hotttt!!!), but it doesn’t overwhelm the story at all. Trigger warning- there are some violent parts, and a few flashbacks for characters where there’s some graphic physical child abuse.
 
  • #8
Lilian, Bicanna and Sororhy should had been done a lone time ago! Now that Dorothy is dead it’s Bicanna and Lilian left! Tommy is a whack job for causing such things to happen to Anne. He ain’t no damn better than Anthony! Sick ass dude!
 
  • #9
Damn, I started reading this book and found it great but then realized it’s still ongoing after more than 900 chapters… seems like a never ending book. At this point, I’d rather not even get invested in it to then get bored of it …
 
  • #10
aaahhh I read too fast! can't wait for more chapters!
 
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