I’m the Villain’s Constellation but I’m Broke Chapter -- Discussion

good ideas, poor execution. not sure if its the original writing or the translation but the story is pretty boring and drags on a lot, while also being too fast paced... ? it was really hard to keep up with the action past the first few chapters and I'm still not sure what the MC and MLs personalities are. they feel extremely bland and uninteresting...

certain plot points sound good but while reading it feels full of missed opportunities and poor delivery...

beginning was the most enjoyable, quality dropped a lot after Spoiler

MC died the story became sooo confusing and fast paced. I couldn't figure out who on earth was on the scene or what they were doing, random characters popped out of nowhere a bunch of action happened and I had no clue what was even happening. had to constantly reread paragraphs and go back to old chapters because they would reference a minor character and be mad and I was just like "who on earth is that"

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Spoiler

the old MC is just... IDK I absolutely have no idea what is even happening with him.

it describes old MC as this big scary giant man and then talk about him being all scared and cowardly and then go back to talking about him being a death warrior under anubis and all that. my mental image of him was twisted into so many different directions and it made following the action even harder lol.

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I did really enjoy the interactions between the constellations but they took up entire chapters worth of dialogue... might've been best to have only the constellations or only the plot because bouncing between them just made reading more confusing.

gave an extra star because I liked the beginning well enough