​It’s a Little Hard to be a Villainess of an Otome Game in Modern Society (WN) Chapter 57 Discussion

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After having read the few translated chapters of the light novel, I was stoked to stumble across someone translating the web novel, but I was honestly disappointed.

After a gripping and possibly almost tumultuous first arc, most of which was already in the LN translation as I recall, there are basically 20 "chapters" that are either irrelevant side stories or literally worldbuilding background information with the differences between the real history and the fictional one, and a mention of all the different works from which elements were used almost fully or inspired.

Some of that can be interesting, but this is simply too much. Unless you have extensive knowledge of various anime, manga, novels, and games, the recognition value of all that supplementary information is lost. Most of this background information has little to no influence on the plot.

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And then there's the whole passage about the MC's friend with little presence having originally been intended to be created as an artificial god, which is technically feasible because the story is reality within fiction within fiction, but frankly absurd and unnecessary.

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The final few translated chapters seem to be picking up the pace again for the second arc, but for the impatient types of readers I can recommend skipping all the way from 30 to 50 (not necessarily the exact chapter where things start happening again, but the transition from side stories to main plot is soft, not hard).
 
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Such a great book by Cassandra M. This book started with such a bang and has continued to grow on me until the end. Xander and Nadine were from such different worlds but were matched perfectly.
 
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Wow l can wait to read more of your stories. Really captivating! Look forward to your next one about Clarke. All the best x
 
  • #7
Don’t read this book, it will steal your money is not worth reading it
 
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This was very different from all other shifter novels I’ve read. Kudos to author for being original but I really didn’t like the world she tried to create. The Alphas were weak!  Ruby was spoiled. There were no fated mates! Characters could have been developed so much better. Would not recommend.
 
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The chapters are getting shorter and boring
 
  • #10
Steamy, hot, delicious and yummy! Alpha Zero is worth every Zero Calories. Jen Jen (the author) has done a great job of pulling her readers into a sexual struggle of temptation without being adversely sexual or graphic.
 
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Yay!!!!! I just saw this update on your ig!finally something to look forward to from janedw!
 
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