- #1
Interesting and enjoyable read. Though, the novel seems to be too distracted in exposition and expansion rather than building on what it has brick by brick. The reincarnated protag also suffers from 'I better not do anything to make things bad for me, better go change the timeline of the story then so it becomes wildly unpredictable, hehe', among other s*upid decisions such as at some moments where he intentionally triggers flags with the yanderes and claiming he's a Mob character only to immediately do a heroic spotlight just because he didn't like a Sengoku Rance moment, though admittedly it didn't seem to affect much change with said yandere's whimsical nature. Overall, the author understands yandere character, but seems to be struggling to keep the story alive on it's own merits. This novel is fun and keeps you reading, but it's doesn't have a godhood quality to it. Hopefully he can tie things down, stop with the adding harem shenanigans, gets character development going and stops having the protagonist be a fake mob character by introducing the real hero and some competition or just admit he's the good hero protagonist now and avoid 100+ chapters of eye rolling predictable story telling actions.
