The Main Heroines are Trying to Kill Me Chapter 98 Discussion

The premise of this novel started off strong, but after approximately 50 chapters, the issues with the story became apparent. This harem fantasy novel, despite having an interesting concept, incorporates far too much drama reminiscent of Korean dramas. Although I a hardcore harem enjoyer, this particular story falls flat. The overused plot device of "I have discovered the truth and feel immense guilt, therefore I must be useless and helpless and cry" becomes tiresome. Additionally, there are noticeable shortcomings in the author's writing quality. The world building is lackluster, with only one academy, one nation, and a focus solely on the MC and his harem. There are no remarkable side characters to leave a lasting impression. Overall, while the initial premise had potential, the execution and quality of writing fails to deliver an exceptional story.

MC:

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You can say this is the saint, the reincarnation of Jesus Christ. He can vomit blood, he can lost some limbs, but he can't lost his kindness (LOL). The novel is written in 1st POV, like he is talking to us, he is showing off us how many good things he did, how many sorrow he experienced. This novel makes MC too pitful like a joke. And the author dont let him be a lowkey, he has to flex out. When his harem knew his sacrifices, that even made him more pitful, he has to endure the pain, the penalty, he is the most pitful in the world. It seems as though the author intentionally uses this negativity to showcase a form of "misery flexing" which is not necessarily an attractive quality in literature. Overall, if you enjoy reading about excessive emotional manipulation and self-pity, then this novel may be for you.

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Read "i killed the player of the academy" if you want a better MC doing right things without pitful, useless harem. Give it a try, it wont's waste your time.

3 stars for the best ending, and MC's hardwork.