- #1
It kinda has the same emotional impact as a wet rag. The main character doesn’t wallow in self-pity, but he does feel ‘guilty’ as the only emotion throughout the novel.The heroines hate his guts, and he doesn’t give them a reason not to as the synopsis suggests.The main flaw of the novel is the way everything is presented.You get a short description of who the heroines are, some character moments of the heroines, but not much going on for the main character, who has only one gimmick.He consistently repeats the same actions for several chapters, and I can tell this is all there will be until the end of the novel.The main gripe you gotta get over in chapter 1 is that he had zero doubt that his ancestor’s legacy was right. He doesn’t admit it, but he believes he’s in a game.If not, how was he certain a System would pop out after ruining the world?Too much vague descriptions for the main character’s own feelings is the problem.
