Mind Swap Chapter Completed Discussion

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3.5 out of 5 stars.

It's very short and easy to consume.

Story Review: This novel is utter tr*sh, but it 1. Doesn't pull any punches and 2. Doesn't leave things in prolonged suspense

It starts kind of basic, but the story then turned over its head.

Characters: The characters are the most "special" thing about this story.

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Literally every person around MC sucks. Literally everyone. It made the different from others that was an overall plus to the novel, but it created a sense of unrealism and general hate when reading through.

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Mizuki (Whether planned or not) was the biggest twist to the story. She is written as an overall strong female side character. The typical Cool, Calm, Collected, woman that gives sound advice when needed.

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But it turns out, she's tr*sh. In morals decision making and in everything else. This girl is the last person you would go to for advice. In the story, she gave out "iffy" advice that would make the reader squint, but it was somewhat okay in the scope of the story. So, (whether this was a stroke of genius or just plain coincidence) this terrible advice cleverly hinted in how garbage she truly was, which makes this story above a lot of others in this genre. It's also this character that makes me hate the ending where she gets off relatively scot free and never once apologized, in scene.

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  • #2
Not normally one to leave a review but there are multiple things I overlooked because the storyline was good. There’s multiple spelling/grammar errors, short chapters making you spend more money, and half the chapters repeat paragraphs or have author comments included. Not worth it at all, sorry.
 
  • #3
This book has a good storyline however the story needs a bit of a polish to make it a great book. The story jumps around a lot, and in places is very confusing. Making the flow of the book a little frustrating. The character all have great potential
 
  • #4
so interesting!
already glued to the story from the blurb.
more updates!!
 
  • #6
thank you so much, hopefully you provide good ending. esp yiran & spouse. take care
 
  • #10
could there be other guys in this story that will pursue Keira? i mean i really pity her for having unrequited love from his ex-mate who can't see her as supposed to be his other half given by the moon goddess
 
  • #11
Loved this book!!! It has ups and downs at every corner.  Was very emotional at points, very good book will read again, definitely!
 
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