The Zombies Are Coming But I’m Laying Down At Home Chapter 118 Discussion

  • #1
It's a great apocalypse slice-of-life but there are two warnings... this isn't quite a romance novel and the MC is definitely overpowered (especially in the extras). It should be a 4.3 rating but I'll make it 5 stars to increase the rating, 3.9 is way too low.

It is good otherwise. MC is a calm, pessimistic, family-oriented person. Her power is quite unique and could be considered as a gold finger since it seems especially wired to protect her Spoiler

it works for her protection and guided by trust so it can't be stolen, coerced or exploited

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I'm not sure ML qualifies as a main character, most of the time he's MC's sidekick or her shadow. They trust each other, like each other and are inseparable but there's not much romance per se. I liked the way she didn't forget about her family but wasn't reckless about looking for them.

Loved the plants! She calls them kindergarden students and they are a lot of fun. I did notice two plot holes but they're not big deal Spoiler

1. the dog, where did he go?! 2. the discomfort she had about feeling "godlike" because something seemed to be changing her

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  • #7
some grammatical errors, but good story.  also gender mixup.
 
  • #10
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