I Was a Small Fish When I Reincarnated, but It Seems That I Can Become a Dragon, so I Will Do My Best Chapter 5 Discussion

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  • #12
I really wanted to enjoy this book but I just couldn't get into it. I struggled with all the chopping and changing. Everyone had a nickname, the language kept swapping between formal & informal randomly. Words being misused i.e entail instead of intel.This can be great, it just needs some refinement
 
  • #13
when are you updating the story cause it's a good story so far  can't wait for the update
 
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