Memoirs of the Returnee Chapter 193 Discussion

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  • #1
Honestly a breath of fresh air. Main character is likeable, intelligent, proactive. Side characters are written well also.

I enjoyed the depiction of magic & swordsmanship--it actually takes a central role here and the system seems original and well thought out.

Setting (Modern/fantasy) is interesting and unique as well.

The writing sometimes gets a little cheesy but the characters and the magic make it enjoyable nonetheless.
 
  • #2
this is a great book I couldn't put it down
 
  • #5
I love all her books amazing read every single last one must read
 
  • #6
The story HAD SO MUCH POTENTIAL. The grammar was atrocious, the constant sentence breaks and inadequate/inaccurate dialogue dragged and made it difficult to read. It was a struggle.
 
  • #7
Loved! Really hoping for a sequel but either way loved the buildup of the couple. Only let down was it felt like it ended before the real danger/drama could happen.
 
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