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So MC solved many problem since baby and then the plot changed. It is fine that the plot change. But suddenly the book that tells the original story changed the text with the same heroine and cannon fodder like the world trying to make MC died whatever the means.
From then the story can be said starts confusing where the original heroine kinda get a whisper to tackle MC and try to get closer. That only one of them can alive when they are 21 years old.
One of the things that didn't make sense is the bandit attack. When MC little she always wary of the flood that happen when she is 5 and 7 years old in her past life. But suddenly there is a bandit attack that says plunder all the surrounding village. But MC never mentioned it in the past life. It is one of the mismatch of the world plotline.
Later story jump into a world of cultivation with a lot of background story and makes the story change genre. Short story MC regain what should be her, rescue her clansman' soul become the strongest destroy the evil human cultivator and back to story world to change many things and then travel through dimension.
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