Transmigrated As The Big Boss’s Mobile System Chapter 17 Discussion

  • Thread starter AlmightyAzor
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  • #1
Too much mess with the phone apps animations. Like being offered a steak that is 70% candle wax. This novel may have worked better as a webtoon, and only if the artist had a gift for turning these awkward and long-winded descriptions into background while the actual plot proceeds at a decent pace. Take these out and the content would be reduced to less than a quarter of its current length. Additional dislike for the author's condescension to women while feminising the MC into a passive dressup toy. Even as a completionist, I know I couldn't read further unless I wanted to waste even more of my life. 2 stars.
 
  • #2
Couldn’t finish… I was getting emotional whiplash . Author has a good story but too much I love you I hate you in the same paragraph.
 
  • #3
i love this book and the alpha asher one.
 
  • #4
this is not fair to us reader you disappear for weeks, leave us hanging, now knowing whether the book is discontinued or you are taking a long break and will be back. leaving a 1 liner saying you'll be back when, won't kill you, you are taking our loyalty towards your book for granted...
 
  • #5
it's time for the truth to come out this is dragging on way too long those kids need their mom back and they need to get their daughter from Abel as well and give him what is coming to him
 
  • #11
There's certainly improvement on Blakes character, which is good. Sadly, the story line is still so stale, it feels as if we are going in circles.
 
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