Building a Yuri Harem~ Chapter 17 Discussion

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  • #1
This is a well translated, light hearted, and funny story, full of fluffy and cute moments. In fact, the entire thing is focused on having as many cotton candy moments per chapter as possible. It's great for a casual read while waiting for other stories to update.

The characters are all really funny and have strong personalities with clear distinctions. They fit well into separate categories, and while this means they lack complexity, it makes it easier to get a grasp on them within moments. It also complements the harem style of romance perfectly.

Of note is the pacing. Each chapter is short (but densely packed with yuri moments), and the pace is a little slow. After 8 chapters, less than a day has passed. It's possible that it will speed up after the character introductions and exposition is over, but taking it day by day like this isn't bad either. We'll have to see.

Keep it up Mr. Robot!
 
  • #3
I really love this book. Its one of the best that I read
 
  • #5
please more chapters will never read another book written by you
 
  • #9
...️...️ I’m so in love with these characters. Can’t wait to see what happens next
 
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