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Pretty decent. Quickly falls apart as the story devolves into a generic dense harem protagonist xianxia template. And not even in a good way. Do you like reading about foot massages? Do you like a protagonist that never fights himself? Do you like sudden and whimsical storylines that have no connection to anything? Have I got a story for youBiggest criticism is the dense protagonist who has multiple girls following along but doesn't do anything with them. It gets increasingly frustrating as the story constantly reinforces how useful a wife would be for the protagonist. To the point that it would save his life.Second biggest is mediocre story structure. The author doesn't properly foreshadow upcoming story-arcs. You are just approaching the end of the previous arc and the protagonist starts talking about the new one out of nowhere. I was wondering why I felt like dropping the series there and I realized its because this next arc had nothing to do with anything. It's just a place with an event coming up. No one has any connection to it, no antagonists have anything to do with it, I don't even know why this place is even important, but we have to go there....As for the description in the synopsis. It quickly falls apart and turns into a generic harem reincarnation xianxia story. And the longer the story goes on, the less story and more dense protagonist harem story replaces it. In fact, the story starts out explaining that the protagonist spent all his time training his sister to save his life at the age of 15. Once he gets there, he'll retire and live a quiet life. Then he turns 15 and decides nah, lets keep the protagonist life going. Let's keep giving everything to my sister.I realize that the story is advertised as: the protagonist is a cannon fodder who trains his sister. But the actual story explains that he's capable of fighting. Maybe not as good as his sister, but he should be able to fight at like 70% of her ability by my estimation. They really never even let you find out because he never really fights. I'm 100 chapters in and I've never seen him actually fight anyone. He practices, he has trained himself just like he's trained his sister, but we never even get to see him try.But one thing we do know about the protagonist is in regards to his foot massages. Many-a-chapter are spent describing the building of his foot massage store.