Turning Chapter 330 Discussion

  • #1
Absolutely amazing. Some pointers for future readers-

- the MC is strong and intelligent.

-the time travelling is the one that makes the age gap, so there isn't anything weird. (The MC was 31 then came back in time when he was 20. The ML is 29 and died when he was 31)

It might look weird how the MC is dumb for going straight to the Calvary after turning back time, but he explains why later on.

The ML is probably the greenest flag I had ever seen.

The MC has a refreshing personality
 
  • #2
Can we get more action and less dialogue, the story is getting stagnant and the same scenes are replaying
 
  • #4
It’s one of the best stores I have read. The writing chocks use some work but everything else is good
 
  • #6
This story is fantastic, I love it from the start, love you dearly author
 
  • #7
I absolutely love how the scenes are described. The words suck the reader in✨
 
  • #8
I never tried BDSM, but it makes for some sexy ass reading! I gotta say, I'm interested now!
 
  • #10
it's a good story but the main focus should be on gu Lichen and ling yiran and yi Jinli. too many people and different issues popping up out of nowhere.  getting me restless. I'm starting to lose interest.  .
 
  • #11
a really great book can’t wait until it gets updated
 
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