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I haven't read too far, but the story is really good. The plot is interesting and I love that it is fantasy bl.My main problem, and the reason I gave it a 4.0 is because of how repetitive the writer is. They will repeat the same thing they wrote two paragraphs ago, again and again in the same chapter. I mean, we aren't s*upid, we get what's going on, no need to dumb it down. I think if they removed the repeated parts the chapters would be 50% less. It's to the point where I will skip sections because I start getting annoyed reading the same thing again.And second, I'm not sure if this is the translation or the author. I'm thinking the author, but how the sentences are structured give me a headache. I have reorganize as I read.For example instead of saying ("Let's be on our way" Yuder said. He looked across the room at blah blah. The situation was grim.) it'll say (Yoder said, gently opening his mouth, thinking of the grim situation they found themselves in, looking across the room at blah blah, "Let's be on our way") Like why? Maybe it's just me, cause I like things to be succinct, but it makes my brain itch.edit 1: I can't read anymore, I really tried because of the good reviews but this isn't for me. There is way too much dialogue. I hate having to read 2 chapters of dialogue when all the author had to say was 'There is a party being held and we have to attend. Be careful, blah blah probably has a trap'. And Yuder annoys me. He's supposed to be smart but he comes across as slow and I think it's cause the author purposefully rights him smart at points and then dumb in others. I also got tired of the sentence structure. Honestly thats probably the main reason I dropped it.I should get myself a medal for getting as far as I did.edit 2: I LIED. I was reading it on the wrong website! I finally got on the correct one and thank god I did because SENTENCE STRUCTURE exist!! I'm going to leave my previous words on here for anyone who makes the same mistake as I do. So if you have problems like I wrote about it's cause it's the wrong website. I think they stole it and it's just gibberish.Yuder still annoys be though 😂
