- #1
The premise of the story is dumb.What are these idiots going to do when the fake general will have to do his actual job? No knowledge of his commanders, soldiers or military skills, but surely he will just make something happen.A jealous ruler killing a rising star or the family abandoning her to not suffer repercussions of her becoming Mulan would be one thing, but this is just so mind-boggling dumb that it has to be called out.The FL herself sucks and seems to lack any kind of attribute of someone actually going through war. A pretty face has her dream and hold-in. She lacks understanding of military law and ignores everything.Her immediate shilling for the ML is just disgusting. Instead of standing on her own merits and considering her methods superior, she instantly falls in line with the ML line of reasoning, which is objectively dumber. ML is nothing else than a literal nepo-baby, while she worked her ass off to get her position, but somehow she considers him her equal. It's insane. No one would feel that.FL lacks caution, planning and any kind of strategic thought. She literally pulls magical abilities out of her ass, from magically being able to hear unknown dice numbers to instant muscle memory.ML is the classical male equivalent of an ice queen and is hyped up from the beginning to the end. As unrealistic as the next one and lacks anything unique about him.Overall, the story is driven by plot armor against winning against scenario ABC. FL is in no way a convincing former general who actually faced a battlefield and worked her way up from a grunt.
