Reincarnated as a Dungeon Master, I Became Unstoppable by Doting on My Monsters—My Gorgeous Monsters Have Started to Conquer the World on Their Own! Chapter v14 Discussion

  • #1
I cant really understand what this author wants, even compared with many bad and hastily written stories, this one is even worse.

The MC is a walking bad*ss with plenty of experience and more, yet for some reason he is dumber than most other MCs and make such bad decissions that im almost glad that the plot armor is so thick that the story can move forward.

The author tries to make his characters into something cool, then use too much drama and ruins everything shortly after.

I aint gonna spoil anything, read the first chapter and you will understand what I mean, but my suggestion, find something else to read. This one aint worth it.
 
  • #5
Nice book but write about Lucy too I will like to read about him
 
  • #6
The reunion between Elli and her dad actually made me cry. What a lovely story. It's fiction I know but the Author makes it so real and relatable. I'm now looking forward to SJ's heart being taken by Elli. He's still not there yet. He has to fall totally in love.
 
  • #7
thank you writer for 10 updates.i like the story very much.waiting for more updates
 
  • #8
hey author, how have you been... pls when is the next update?
 
  • #10
Currently addicted to your Shark series, but freakin love this book too. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
 
  • #11
Dang it I'm only to chapter 3 and can't put this down my boyfriend has been asking me to hangout since yesterday and i have told him im busy lol He can wait this book cant. Dont worry he still loves me. Oh and Victoria needs slapped just saying and dont get me started on Shane.
 
  • #13
The story flow is good. I can't help but feel,  though,  that the author changed towards the end of the first book because the language changed. the grammar used to be good and the story was consistent then towards the end,  including the bonuses,  the grammar got really bad plus, which irked me.
 
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