A Demon Lord’s Tale: Dungeons, Monster Girls, and Heartwarming Bliss Chapter 334 Discussion

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  • #1
The writing in this story went from good to horribly cringy. The story is now full of a self-absorbed MC with a personality disorder.

And the translation is mangled by a group who either decided to self-insert their own slangs and insults, or the author is actually an American.
 
  • #3
this cant be called a chapter release! a page more like. a good read but a rip off
 
  • #4
Absolutely breath taking the second book had me sitting on the edge of my seat, the riveting relationships, the backstabbing, the love and loss all of it was a wonderful way to end the second book I really hope there's a third on the way. Please dont let it end like this I have to know whats next.
 
  • #5
This book was beautifully done. I can not wait to read more!
 
  • #6
the book is great so far, I hope I don't have to wait too long for the next chapter's.
 
  • #8
Thank you for another great book! I'm going to miss Yum yum but I'm sure Liam will keep me occupied soon! :)
 
  • #10
though the overall story is good, but it need to emphasize on the \"detective\" side story to be more thriller..... overall in serial of Lilyhyz novels.... love the sexiest narrations, wild and fresh but not slutty.
 
  • #11
im enjoying the book.i  like the story line. some if the words are misspelled
 
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