There’s Something Not Quite Right With My Lover Chapter Completed Discussion

  • #1
It felt like a chore to read, even though it's a short story. There's pretty much no relationship development between MC and ml, even after MC found out about ml's background. It's basically just ML constantly being in heat and MC accepting his possessivness while feeling wronged. That's all their relationship amounts to, I don't see any fluff or romance here, besides sleeping together there is nothing else that connects them. A disappointing read.
 
  • #4
This Story is so intriguing... Damn! Each update is sooo goood..haha. Just Love Author Muse and all her amazing page turner Stories
 
  • #5
Love the way you write the story, you get an insight into the thoughts and surroundings around the characters and you write in detail! Gotta say this is the first time I've actually been hooked on a story and I am already reading your second story. ...
 
  • #6
Great story.  Wish it had a little more to it at the end wrapping things up, was kind of abrupt.  Enjoyed reading it over several months.  Laughed, cried & got angry with the characters which made it enjoyable!  I would read it again and probably will.
 
  • #7
Love the author! Love this book (all its parts)! With Lucious, I didn’t see coming all the depth of his character, but in the end I was so happy with the surprise. Just wonderful story so well written as always ...
 
  • #9
I have throughly enjoyed this book! With it’s twist and turns. Great book
 
  • #10
Thanks for letting us know what is going on! School is rough starting I homeschool 3 boys! This is my escape ....... Side note after rereading brittneys chapter I feel like she wont just go away that easy.
 
  • #12
Such a perfect ending, but I'm still crying while writing this.  ???❤❤❤❤
 
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