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I like the fml's character — clever with her words, refreshing with a right of elegance and a has chill personality, and most of all capable in her own ways. As of now, I have nothing to point out about her character because I liked the way how laid back she is despite the ridicule she have received.On the other hand, the ML is not that bad, but I couldn't stop comparing him to my favored ML of all time from another novel. He's in the middle of a scale between likeable and dull (as in boring) : he can be likeable in some ways because at least he respected her even when she was in a dirty state, next is he can be cute sometimes when he misunderstood the fml's (not-so-provocative) words. However, one reason I find him boring as of now is because the fML has shown personality and almost of the situations were all about her languidly slaying the clowns. Also, I was kind of disappointed when Spoiler
he did not read the reports about fml's ab*se. Although he had reasoned that nothing would change because of her position, I would personally checked her background if it's 1. Jeopardize his position 2. If she had suspicious shits going on around her 3. Just a fact check on on how should he deal her before and after the wedding
[collapse] things like thinking critically (about his prospective partner) and a better character judge, though he didn't do anything annoying yet, but I wished he's more of a dynamic person?As per the pacing of the story, I do not have much qualms about it being slowed but I don't definitely think that her making preparations to her business should be rushed either since she started gaining attention of her enemies. It will go on eventually and surely. Moreover, I personally think that there's no boring situation when the fML is ready to kick ass with her tea and desserts.
