The story is ok. The grammar and syntax struggle in some areas. Story feels like it drags and the main character is frustrating. Some people really love it, I did not.
Naaalala ko noong binisita ko ang aking lola sa nayon, at naghulog siya ng ilang seryosong karunungan sa akin. Sinabi niya \\"Apo, isang araw may mga tao na mag-aaksaya ng kanilang oras sa pagbabasa ng iyong komento.\\" Ngayon ang araw na iyon.
I’d really like to know WHY you authors think the more chapters you have the better. I can’t believe there’s 174 chapters to this story. No true author would do that to their readers.