- #1
The premise is great. BUT the novel slacks off when introducing characters, it barely gives you any idea of what a character looks like, it only bothers to give you stuff like, "He had white hair" and such. The amount of characters which lack detailed or atleast general descriptions of their appearance is just baffling. (Spoiler, it's every character). The vague explanations of the events/battles doesn't help either, they've so far neglected elaborating on it. The fights feel stale and lacking as it doesn't give you a sense of danger since the battlefield seems like a plain empty field. (There's barely any effort on describing and at most only one or two words are used to describe the whole place and that makes it difficult to imagine the fights). Honestly I love the premise, but I feel that the story is moving far too hastily, we've gone through several events which showcase the protagonists abilities but so far we haven't been given a proper measure of his abilities (His limits, what his ability requires to activate, etc.) nor have we been given a proper technical explanation as to how exactly it works. So, it's enjoyable, but it's currently overrated! (I don't believe the people who compliment the character writing when they've read the Multiverse translation.. But to each their own).
