The Principle of a Philosopher by Eternal Fool “Asley” Chapter 50 Discussion

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This novel is undoubtedly overrated. The story is mediocre, and 3.0 star is the best grade I could possibly give it.

The character development is shallow throughout the novel. The MC fails to mature over the 5000 years of living and has no goal in mind, ultimately creating a boring plot with few serious conflicts. The novel evokes humor at times, however, for the most part, it remains quite balnd to readers.

It gets on my nerve how the MC keeps on reciting every spell with "Rise, A-rise, A-rise!" like he has eight grade syndrome, and it confuses me on why the MC continues to act like an idiot and fails to learn from his mistakes. The author should have fleshed out more emotional aspects and touch upon his lack of "humanity".

The character relationships are also undeveloped, and there are times when too many time skips make the novel slightly confusing.

TL;DR -->If you can stand someone reading about someone with an eighth-grade syndrome and don't mind wasting time on shallow character development, go for it. The humor definitely makes it funny.
 
  • #2
Good book, but wouldn't advise reading. The writer appears to have abandoned the book.
 
  • #3
I cannot believe you have not written another chapter in 3 weeks unbelievable
 
  • #4
Few mistakes but good read can’t wait to see what happens in the next book!
 
  • #5
The book was pretty good but it had to many mistakes in it.You changed the Pharmaceutical company name 3 times. The ending was a little too rushed. But all in all, I would recommend some other people to read it..
 
  • #6
This book has it all: unrequited love, denial, attraction, surrender, power plays, courage, loyalty, protection and more.  Highly recommended reading.
 
  • #7
I love dillion!!! I wish I had a friend like him.
 
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