- #1
Im sorry but this story is very boring. I tried, trust me, I really tried to like but it really sucks. First of all that kind of ability details so many plot holes and restrictions. Secondly the flow of your story is very, very, very uninteresting. Third, the MC is a very big coward, I mean you get kicked out and all and with so many chapters ahead the MC is till spineless! It gets very annoying chapter by chapter to the point where the flow of the story isnt really relevant anymore. And just to throw it out there, the title you gave is super ultimate? From the title alone you can clearly understand why the story is so s*upid. You cannot have a super if the skill is already an ultimate skill! Ultimate is an absolute statement and the fact that you have that shitty ability with that type shitty MC personality, I really find it hard to believe that this novel reached so many chapters. Its good to be nice in a story but your setting in your story is riddled with negative emotion that triggers growth for the MC and if you really put yourself in the shoes of your MC every action made in this story became extremely unrealistic thats why I called it s*upid. If anyone of you out there want to read this novel, if you like a boring spineless MC then knock yourself out.
