Villain: After Slacking Off, The Protagonist Collapse Chapter -- Discussion

Cielll · February 17,2025

Author mishmashes two tropes; "I transmigrated into villain and ~~pokemons~~ heroines hear my inner thoughts" pattern. And "I become OP by actively doing nothing" pattern.

Its bad because author keeps forgetting his own setting and writes something else. And only remember it when its convenient.

Like MC thinking as if it was him who chased one girl and missing out on another girl who liked him. Except it wasn't him who chased the girl A and you never met girl B. Girl B liked og character not you. You are a transmigrator not a regressor.

Or how MC goes out incognito, intentionally aggravates a young master so we get a faceslap scene. Actively looking for trouble and showing off is definitely not slacking off behaviour.

Personally I despise this amateur attitude so its 1 star for me.

But if you want to read a random overbearing cultivator doing random op cultivator things. It's palatable.

Fallen_Angel_268C · February 19,2025

I will read again...I was a good book

LOVEcats321 · February 19,2025

Good so far, really interesting

phoenix_8888 · February 19,2025

.....from the begining to the end of the story, so that we can help to insert some specific data according to the story to highlight its ending and to make it more interesting, ...!

Patheror · February 19,2025

A hearty thank you to everyone who has given my book a try. I know this is not my best story, but I’m having fun writing it. I’m trying to update daily, I missed 1 day because of the time difference where I live & where the app is originated from. But again, thank you all for your gems and reviews.

kingstarfish · February 19,2025

I feel like Aurora is actually protecting Keegan from Dahlia’s plans.

MeMeek · February 19,2025

Horrible ending. Not complete in my opinion. Plus the 2 leads in this book were of poor character until the end when they started to grow and then bam it’s over?

PLEHLUCIKEN · February 20,2025

Umm so where is the LYCAN? Alpha D admittedly is a tyrant but NOT a lycan! so maybe she is? I'm still reading it and so far I'm loving it ???

UnknownFan · February 20,2025

I can believe ALPHA RILEY is this loving .........

Lapllace · February 20,2025

Lol, she should run away now. Jk, Ik she can't without getting caught but it would be nice to read how it turns out to be if she runs away

SwordDemon876 · February 20,2025

I love stories where the leading lady is an innocent one while the leading man is like a beast HAHAHA.

FacelessEnigma · February 20,2025

this is an awesome book. I could not stop reading it. can't wait for the second book

ArchProgenitor · February 20,2025

loved it, are you going to write any more