- #1
The author tried their best to make this work and it's quite ingenious at times, but the setting is fundamentally flawed. First off, the "heroines can hear my thoughts" trope is inherently flawed because it cannot go on forever, but where the author really drove themselves into a corner is with the "slacking off system, " i.e. Growing stronger by doing nothing. This leads to dozens of pages in a row where the MC isn't even mentioned. Why? Obviously because he has to slack off while others do the work, however, I don't really care about these other characters so the grand battle scenes and schemes are utterly boring.
