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So far, I rate this story 4 stars. The reasons are as follow:
+ Good story line with moderate character development
+ Moderate logic and not so many plot hole. At least, the author try to hide the plot hole.
+ The story shift focus at some point and are now not as enjoyable to see her doing mission. However, it is not that bad as the focus is now more on "how the main char develop". In the past, it is more focus on how she do the mission and you would enjoy the reality slap. Now you enjoy how other view her as she become what you would call a goddess. Well, she still as weak as an ant in the eyes of some other special characters but in the world that she created, she is basically a goddess now.
- The character are forced to be dumb at some point for no reason.
- The transition of the story are forced at some point and are very noticeable, this make the story look dumb if the reader are not forgiving for these mistake.
I recommend this novel if you have read other reincarnate novel, transport to another world novel or some sort of one more chance at life novel because most of the mission she did in this novel is to give the main characters from the novels above a dose of reality. It would give you an extra point at enjoyment.
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