- #1
It was gooing well enough until it fell off a cliff exploded in mid air and got atomized by a galactic ion beam at chapter 160.I know it's common to need more powerful enemies because of power creep but that was just a train wreck... completely out of the blue and not in line with the pacing of the story so far.Could have done better without bringing the usual stereotypes into the story.As far as world building or character descriptions go I didn't really care I usually skip character descriptions anyway it's too annoying for me to imagine their look would rather remember them by their quirks and world building can happen naturally as the MC interacts with the world without much narration from the author so I'm not bothered by it much but the story needs to be solid.
