The Mysterious Child: An Adventure Tale Beginning with Numerology Chapter 246 Discussion

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TLDR with super minor spoilers:

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Overall, the story is smooth with well-paced arcs. Sometimes, more detailed segments would be better than time skips. The protagonist's personality traits from before reincarnation are not as evident afterward, despite the author's claims. The comedy hits just right for me. Character development feels both present and absent. Cheat powers handled weirdly. Romance aspect is being avoided like plague.

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Overall, the story is very smooth, and each arc is of perfect length. However, sometimes I wish the author would extend specific parts instead of just doing a time skip.

Also regarding protagonist personality

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In the pre-reincarnation arc, the main character is shown as a mythology otaku, loner, and introvert.

However, after reincarnation, the loner/introvert traits seem to disappear. The author claims these traits are still present, but I don't sense them when the main character interacts with people or deals with problems. It's not a significant issue, but I think the pre-reincarnation chapters should have simply depicted him as a mythology otaku without emphasizing the protagonist's personality.

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Regarding comedy aspect for me personality it hits just right of course there's not that many but I would say it is well done.

Regarding character development, to be honest, it's both present and absent.

Regarding main characters *cheat powers*:

Main character is sometimes very op but overall weirdly not too op. Author doesn't know how to handle power balance sometimes that makes me irritated. But overall doesn't have that huge of impact.

Author naming sense is very bad.

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Example naming 2 woman's who dislike each another 'Left' and 'Right'. Or calling holy country Hollywood.... There's a lot more where that came from.

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Overall: Very fun story as I like this type of concept I would say its really well done. But authors naming sense is one of the worse. At start it was decent but its getting worse and worse.
 
  • #3
Really enjoyed the story! Looking forward to seeing what happens with the sequel!!!
 
  • #5
Another hold your breath and hold you don’t pass out chapter
 
  • #8
Wow! Interesting plot with interesting characters
 
  • #10
Here we go again with the eye crack ??
 
  • #12
This was an amazing read and so beautifully written. I could not pull myself away. It really draws you in and makes you feel as though you are part of the story. I can't wait for more from this author! This has definitely been my favorite so far but will definitely be hard to to beat.
 
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