After the Disabled God of War Became My Concubine Chapter 171 Discussion

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  • #1
It’s not as good as the ratings make it out to be. Beginning is slow and tedious, with too much repetitive writing about the setting. Nothing much happens over 100 chapters. Then the action bits is rushed and the dumb/evil emperor brother of MC dies so unsatisfactorily quick. One sentence death. Somehow he never kills a weak and sickly captured MC but conveniently delays MC death so that MC can be rescued by ML as the damsel in distress that MC is. Plot armor. Also long slow burn romance that I lost interest in them getting together and when they do, I find myself skimming all the “sweet” parts cause I just want to get to the end now. Rarely is a highly rated novel on here so disappointing to read.

This novel has a weak rabbit MC that never learns to bite when cornered. He is basically useless but we are supposed to find him endearing just because he doesn’t throw tantrums. Once ML is cured he does everything, and as soon as ML leaves MC side, MC becomes a damsel in distress. Disappointing.
 
  • #2
love the story, I hate the king and queen! Poor Nick.. has his blue balls
 
  • #3
The long wait is over, I already like the book! Can't wait to read it till the end! I know this book will be good like your other stories because you're an amazing author Lilhyz! Can you pls make this book a little longer than your other book? sending love!
 
  • #4
so I am still reading book 3 and I am itching to know who sylvain's mate is
 
  • #9
habang tumatagal nakakawalang gana na ang storya. subrang ganda nong umpisa pero mula nong nagkahiwalay yong bida wala na kahit saan2x na pumunta yong storya
 
  • #12
Nice.. where is the next chapter?
 
  • #13
Love all the books and enjoyed all the extra chapters. Looking forward to the next book
 
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