- #1
This novel has decent characters and I'm fine with MC, I also love the harems. But here is the problem - I also expect a decent power system from this type of novel and I hate when plot holes become way too obvious or when the author changes the concepts half-way through the story. Here is the thing - at the beginning (in 5-6 chapters) it was obviously stated that ALL zombies have the gel which could help them evolve... So MC feeds those gels to his zombie GF and she evolves, after that she needs "advanced" gels which could be gotten only from "mutated" zombies. But, instead of doing the obvious thing - collecting gels from ordinary zombies and then feeding them to the random controlled zombie (MC has the ability) he starts to search for actual mutated zombies in dangerous areas! Well, it isn't so bad yet, but... later the author changes concept completely! And now he states that only mutated zombies have the gels and before that, they evolved from eating brains... which, of course, contradicts what was said at the beginning of the novel and what actually happened. I even checked RAWs (I thought maybe the author rewrote beginning chapters?), but no - they are the same description of GF getting gels from ordinary zombies. Even so, couldn't he still make mutated zombies by feeding them with brains? But no, he still tries to find mutated ones even if he kills hundreds of ordinary zombies, completely wasting this "resource".Now, add to that abstract and rather random power-system without strict power levels and lackluster fights and you can make a conclusion what this novel sucks at "weak to strong" genre. What about Ecchi? It isn't p*rn novel either, from what I've read in spoilers there the first s*x scene would be in about 120-130 chapters, there few tens of sex-scenes in the whole 1300 chapters of the novel, so most of the plot will follow weak-to-strong genre and it already s**ked at it within first 100 chapters.
