- #1
The gist of the story is as normal as they come, dude has powers in the apocalypse and wants to survive while trying to cure his crush. The thing that puts me off is how everything is unbelievable. The story explains how the zombies are in fact more terrifying than normal ones because they still have their senses. This to me is the basic outline of a zombie, which movie has zombies that are blind? The MC then goes on to fight against two zombies, distracting them with the one he controls then rushing them from behind. If someone was running, they would make a ton of sound. Unless the MC is floating in the air by the grace of bs then I don't see how he would be able to take out them both without them turning and attacking him.
He also has some strange moments where he does something that just doesn't make sense. The whole world is dying from the virus takeover, so there would be copious amounts of blood everywhere. Yet the MC think's it's a good idea to disinfect a place so the zombies won't notice them. Disinfectant has a scent, it contributes to how most hospitals have that distinct smell. You'd think that introducing a new, unfamiliar scent would be unwise when whatever is able to sense that likely wants your brains in their mouth. If anything, a bloody odour would only be normal, with bodies strewn all over the place and rotting corpses everywhere it'd be weird if a place didn't have that scent.
That aside, the MC just straight up has an unlikable personality. His thoughts are degrading towards women in an 'oh? She's not dead yet or screaming for help being a damsel in distress' kind of way. This seems to be a common trend particularly in Chinese novels but it is what it is. He's also pe*verted and acts like a teenager in heat. He doesn't think things through, he rushes into a 1v10 solely because he doesn't want his zombie crush to be revealed. I don't know how he can think that is a good idea but it happened. His knife magically changed into a sword mid-fight then became a knife again because knives can do that. Apparently cutting a zombies' throat open is effective at insta-killing them while digging through their brains is not. He touches a substance that came out of a zombie that died less than ten seconds ago and somehow isn't infected. If that isn't enough, he goes on to romantically wipe off a bloodstain on his zombie crush. I swear at this point all the author is doing is showing how the MC will absolutely never become infected. I'd put money on the fact that he could straight up drink zombie blood and still be fine because his plot armour covers his insides too. I could go on but this is getting a bit long so I'll cut it here.
[collapse]Overall, a poor excuse for a novel. The MC isn't the brightest of the bunch, the setting is a named mist in the background and the inconsistencies I'm sure will pile up doesn't help it either. Not to mention the first ~88 chapters are poorly done. I do not recommend reading under any circumstances.
