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Above average, the novel sittings is boring for now, (I would have preferred if there is no system or at least a basic system), the MC is surprisingly good, but the author is misusing him, instead of a slow and solid start to build the foundations for future arcs, it feels like he wanted to hurry and make him a predator for protagonists.And this is just uncool, I would have preferred if the MC had no system and just used his knowledge from the novel and the first antagonist/protagonist was more competent (for example, instead of using the flimsy relationship of a villain that destined to ruin and a main character that will always success) He could have just made it a normal world (without the s*upid forced rules of novels and cliches) and the progress more realistic... Even if the first antagonist/protagonist's success in his business should not mean success in relationships automatically (like what the author is implying) Final judgment: unless the author is planning for a different take on this kind of novel, it will fail to keep readers.I will rate 4 stars, if the author was able to keep the novel interesting then it will be 5.
