- #1
1. I get it that she's supposed to be an extremely indifferent medical/healing fanatic, but there's a difference between being indifferent and being a doormat. She almost never counters others when they falsely accuse her. Most of the time the explanations come in the form of the MLs' sword, attacks or intimidating glances... 🙄 I also question why she's never questioned their sudden change of 'targets' from orgFL to her. And also wonder why she never persists on driving the MLs away (even after they've paid back their debts) when she was so worried initially about accumulating heaven's anger from stealing FL's luck.
2. How big of a Mary Sue the MC actually is. Unique pill concocting methods? She's got it. Supremely OPed hitherto unseen in human world arrays? She's got it. Indefinite and unnecessary kindness? She's got it. A bunch of well to do suitors? She's got it~ And the most rich, extremely OP bestest of best in entire existence being her ML? Ofc she's got it too 😂🤷🏻♀️ the story starts out well but soon becomes similar to the cliched "OP genius Assassin/Doctor reborn as a waste" story.
3. The annoying and large harem... These dudes just magically get their past life memories back once MC saves them and suddenly don't give two shi*s about the orgFL, who they were simping for till then. I get it that they feel guilty/like they owe it to the MC cause in their previous life they attributed all the efforts and life-saving grace she's given them to the orgFL. But why do they, in this life swarm to & stick close to the MC so much? Why not leave it at just gratitude and pay it back in other ways when their obstinate proximity makes MC uncomfortable (but ofc she doesn't do much about it🤷🏻♀️)..
4. How brain-dead the side characters are (especially the orgFL). I get it that orgFL has been spoilt all her life but does that necessarily imply that she'll become a s*upid one-dimensional greentea bi~ch who only knows how to jump from man to man and use her beauty & "tears" as weapons? She's supposed to be an extremely talented cultivator favoured by the heavens but ofc her talents could never match up with the MC even with all of heaven's favour~~
On that not there are no traces of FL's halo, she's got no cheats, no heavenly interventions, nothing.. all she's got is her beauty which makes people fall for her left and right (until the MC appears that is.. then they just switch targets) The actual "protagonist halo" is on MC and her alone or she's got some sort of fate siphon skill which is slowly making her the harem lord the orgFL was in last life.
5. How the ML who's supposed to be bestest of the bestest, richest of the richest, smartest of the smartest blahblah just hangs around with her all wounded and weakened. He might be hanging around to find out more of how she knows almost all his clan's secret techniques or/and be hiding from enemies at a place no one would think to look, but does that mean he must remain wounded and weakened? If there are enemies aiming for your life and position, it makes more sense to heal yourself faster so you can be ready to deal with them. And he can just set people to watch her. with all the descriptions on how powerful and influential he is it seems to be quite illogical how he wouldn't get a high leveled healer to heal him first.
[collapse]The translator did a really good job with the translation so it kept me from dropping the story too early.. But after 50 chapters I really couldn't hold on. I'll come back once it's completely translated and skim through it to get the gist of the story, but till then, adios! I'm out~ 👋