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I thought the plot was going to be MC trying to rectify her past mistake of being too kind and a pushover and try the hardest to keep a distance between the FL and her entourage or op suiters.
Instead, it's about her trying the same thing as past, just charge money and pretend to be cold and aloof. Like yeah, she has a cold face, but that is it as far as trying to change her fate.
And for the other main issue I had was how dumb all the characters are, to the point if feels like except for a few characters that are on MC's side (of course), everyone had a giant hole for brain.
And the FL is nothing more than a pretty girl who just happens to be the one loved by fate or whatever. But the FL never does anything besides fainting and causing trouble to the people who are trying to help.
To me, she feels two faced. Because there is no way she is not jealous of MC. She keeps trying to steal her credits. When the male interests ask her if she is the one who helped them, she never refutes their claim. Which totally gives me the green tea bit*h vibe.
And the last thing, and the more irritating is, the MC herself. She keeps trying to have this image of an unnerved passerby. But when the male interests trys to stick to her, she never tries to make them go away.
The only thing that interests me in the story is the world building and the rather relax paced cultivation described here.
I especially like the beyond the boundary description. Which the whole Amazon feel.
The story pacing is good, except when it comes to conflict related scene. It either seem to relaxed or too fast paced.
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