The Healer Demands Payment! Chapter 21 Discussion

  • Thread starter SeraphWedd
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  • #1
It's the kind of story I like and so far it's OK. The characters are sounding "epic" -- beautiful creatures, talented, powerful and all that good stuff. The writing style, hmmm... I find the author tends to be repetitive and wordy -- like, 2-3 paragraphs full of words, but not really moving the story along. Hopefully, I won't see much of the same as I read further along.
 
  • #2
please open up more chapters I can't live without this story
 
  • #3
so Good story and not to Long and you dont get bored.
 
  • #5
Fantastic read, you really know how to bring characters to life. There were parts that made me laugh out loud. Thanks and please keep writing you have a real gift.
 
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