The Healer Demands Payment! Chapter 98.1 Discussion

  • Thread starter Yui
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  • #1
It’s not bad, I would say it’s more good-mediocre. The story doesn’t strongly follow the proposed plot as much as I thought it would. Going into it, I thought the MC would be charging left and right. She sort of does and it’s a prevalent theme but it’s seems to be more for the beginning. Also, there are way too many guys now lmao. The past seems to be a big deal but also it doesn’t come up as much as I thought it would. I’ll keep reading it but sometimes it feels like the author is just dragging things out. I love the MC’s character tho. And the MC and ML interaction is cute. Not sure where the FL went tho.
 
  • #2
I just love the book. I am glad finally seeing a fl who is not a doormat or naive. Fed up with reading who don't take stand make people insult them.Angela is really different. Best female lead I ever read.
 
  • #3
author does not speak English, so grammar is not great. story is cute and sex hot. Not a strong female or male lead. i wanted to see Lina figuring out how to defend herself and use her magic. Had a lot of potential with juicier plots but nothing explored. Easy reading.
 
  • #4
author i gave 2 gems today can we plz also have two chapters today
 
  • #6
I know English is the authors second language, but that doesn’t excuse the poor quality of writing. Jumping from past tense to present tense, first person to third person, it’s confusing and frustrating as a reader that I have to figure out what’s going on, rather than simply follow the story line.
 
  • #7
And madelyn has money she can still have her own biological children if she wants too by using modern science.
 
  • #8
am really loving Hunter and Abi!!!! wen is d next chapter coming up? please don't let d story too lengthy.... nice one author.... looks as if am seeing a movie... keep up ur good writing!!
 
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