- #1
Started off ok but it's reaaaaaaaaally slow to read in terms of both the plot and romance.In terms of the romance...... well, what romance? LOL. 90 chapters in and all they've done is hold hands. They have some sweet moments together, but it's mainly just them admiring each other.The ML is a typical super tall, super handsome, super powerful, super quiet, loves MC to death kind of character and he's very one dimensional. MC is a bit more interesting as he has a bit of a mysterious backstory. Both of them are workaholics, except the author doesn't do a very good job of making their jobs interesting.And that's a big issue with the plot too. It's very slow and is mainly about the couple working. It's getting really boring to read about the Nth time that MC has done a lecture or the Nth time that the marshal has flown across the universe to see MC. There's a lot of throwaway characters too - as in characters that appear once or twice and never again. You really only need to remember like 3 other side characters. MC's assistant doesn't even get a name until 60+ chapters in!!Also, the story would greatly benefit from being edited. The author is quite repetitive. For example, describing a big hotel would be like "the huge hotel"..."the massive hotel"..."the hotel with over 200 floors"..."hotel that towered over the skyline"... like ok we get it. Hotel is big.
