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The author is pretty good with one piece lore and weaving his story parallel to the events that happen, making tiny changes here and there that fill in questions that weren't really answered in the show. Very interesting to read and probably even more fun for diehard fans.The translation could benefit greatly from some editing occasionally you will see entire sentences repeated with slightly different translation so it is kept in following the first. Along with words that are definitely not right and changing certain names Hina will be Tina and then Hina again. Dumb simple fixes that would make it much better.His system is a little inconsistent and he doesn't really use it so it's more like the MC trains to get strong instead of getting a bunch of god rolls every time he uses it. Which I am okay with but it feels weird for a novel called super card system to have the system really fleshed out in the first few chapters and then barely mentioned after that. For example I think in chapter 120 he draws a new card he likes and you don't find out anything about it's stats or abilities until chapter 140, it's just equipped and he pulls abilities out whenever it is cool lol.
