I Became the Witch Who Destroyed the World Chapter 26 Discussion

  • #1
Subjective review: 1.8/5. (Sub-par, borderline bad.)

Objective review: 0.5/5 (awful, among the worst I have ever read.)

I can't continue reading this.

The translation quality of this series is awful. Not horrific MTL level of bad, but still consistently bad and for far too many chapters.

Additonally, I also feel like this author is an amateur. The prose is at the level of "I am here. I do this. Now I do this. Oh by the way that thing before is done but I didn't tell you." It's extremely jarring. Also, the speed at which it goes from A to B to XYZ is discombobulating. (I.E. Disorienting, confusing, etc.) The pacing is all over the place.

Very rarely do I have to reread things to understand what's going on. Here, I reread things and I still struggle to understand.

I also can't help but feel like the characters are extremely bland, and poorly built upon. Just from the first several chapters about the MC. I can tell you their name, who they are, and what they do. But that is it. It's as simple as 1, 2, 3. There is nothing else to them. There is no emotional attachment, no greater depth, nothing. They have the personality of a wet noodle.
 
  • #3
I have read every book you have written and I’m currently, thoroughly enjoying tangled in his sheets and the alpha claimed me deeply! Your writing is very capturing! I have gone from one story to another and always look forward to any new works from you. Keep up the FANTASTIC work!
 
  • #7
Enjoyed the book. the war was a bit rushed n not enough info to get the understanding better as to why n what but I did like the characters
 
  • #8
Zander is complicated. I just hope he stops pushing her away soon and gets to the part that makes this book live up to its name Protected by the bully. so far he is the one hurting her not protecting her.
 
  • #10
Well when will this story end. It’s taking too long although it’s good but it’s being stretched at this point.
 
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