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Becoming the Male Lead’s White Moonlight Chapter 3.3 Discussion

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B0mbaCl0ckhD

B0mbaCl0ckhD

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Story seems alright so far, but there is a serious amount of mixing up tenses. For example, the first sentence of Chapter 3.3 is this:

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After clean up her most important face, Ling Rong finally remembers that she is still a Senior High Year 2 student and can’t escape from homework.

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Which should be this:

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After cleaning up her most important face, Ling Rong finally remembered that she was still a Senior High Year 2 student and couldn't escape from homework.

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I highly suggest finding a proofreader.
 
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huH2

huH2

  • #3
Very nice sweet and no too much drama
 
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Highdaoist

Highdaoist

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that you have no intention of what so ever to sleep with him... And Cole is fucking gross. Other than sleeping with women he  doesn't have other qualities...And after seeing him sleeping with another woman in their bed.... she still wants to sleep with him?
 
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Lucky00

Lucky00

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love the storyline I couldn't put it down!
 
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BrandonDowntain

BrandonDowntain

  • #7
why is it taking so long to get more chapters of this book? when will you post more chapters?
 
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