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I like the idea of this story, and the characters. But the further I go the more I wonder if I will keep reading. Gave 3/5 as it has potential and maybe this section will get over the hump and improve again.What is with this obsession that having s*x until your partner CAN'T MOVE or until they FALL UNCONCIOUS?! Just... what? Plus it is always the woman being so ab*sed by the man who supposedly loves her more than anything. Maybe, you know, treat her that way? I expected a lot of s*x scenes - after all it is tagged as smut - but this kind of abusive s*x isn't hot.Maybe they will start talking again. And in a healthy way, not the way where he expects a woman who has been ab*sed her entire life to instantly trust in his love and security. And maybe don't fuel the trauma by giving her the cold shoulder and making her think you'll leave her if she doesn't please you. That's ab*se as well.It's a shame, as it started good and had promise... yes it has the 'obsessive love' tag but that doesn't have to mean controlling and abusive love.
