The First Kindergarten in the Universe Chapter 1 part1 Discussion

Author your stories are just amazing ....after i read your stories and the way you write i dont like others so i have nothing to read other than yours ..that's how much you have trapped me in your lovely emotionful way of writings

my fiRst rating was 1 star because it was still early to say, few chapters. now, I still give 1 star at 667 chapters. the story might be interesting but it is starting to feel dragging. lengthy novel always feel like a drag and a waste of time / money / effort.

I wish there were more chapters, but it’s good so far.

Pretty much the same wY you abandoned your other book, Alpha Rejected by His Human Mate. You should just delete the whole book off the app, instead of drawing people into a book that will never be finished.

Love this book

Love It!!!

Absolutely love it. It kept my full attention. I read it in a day. I really hope there ends up being a part two. Where it digs into there new life and sheds some light on Siya and Landon. And maybe Victoria and Aaron have a better chance with a loving romantic life. Hopefully Emily two with her guy.

So a man beats, rapes, assualts a women & the women still falls in love with him. Wtf?Terrorizing, raping & beating a women doesn't make u man. This is disgusting. How can someone write such a shitty story?Is glorifying rape & abuse is new trend Or something?

Such an interesting story! Couldn't put it down <3

Plot and characters are decent, but spelling, sentence structure and grammar are awful.  Author needs to do some serious (not ‘seriosity’ as you say in your book) editing. Once the basic sentence structures, spelling and grammar are corrected, this story would be much easier to read.