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The story is fine. I keep reading about the amateurish writing but thats because people didnt see through its cause.MC losses his mind over time.Spoiler
Its linked to his magic and the more he dives down the more he loses himself.
[collapse] There is a weird future-sight moment that actually makes no sense but well... There are people who can think binary and people who cant. Thats how it is. You can explain the theories of timetravel and there are still 3 opinions on its logic and execution/ limitations. (Steinsgate has done it well and a few others but thats just my opinion. There are people who do not believe in relative timelines.) The ending got reworked as far as I heard or it has two endings. I dont get it but maybe I will find those sidestories one day.SpoilerIts a true ending without happy ending feeling.
[collapse] Death is finite so is the mental capacity of humans. Tortuted people can breakdown after a while without chances of recovery, s*aves can be so used to that life that they become dependent for the rest of their lifes, depressed people can be just like that if they dont get help or help themselves. Its not nice and I didnt like it but its also not my story. I just read it.
