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It's started reasonably well. There's the whole "I was cast out so I'm gonna kill everybody". But you later find that he's not that unreasonable.He gets a lot of power very fast, but the story felt more about personal conflicts than actual combat and there's some threats hinted that were as over the top as the protagonist, if not more.All in all an ok read, until around chapter 60. Then it falls apart. A nice person turns evil then not so much then a companion in two chapters. A character from way back loses an arm due to a mistake of the MC and suddenly a lvl 700 healer can't heal it back to what it was. A black dragon appears out of nowhere. An important character dies in two sentences. The entire funeral gets less than a paragraph. A major character gets left behind in three paragraphs. And then I gave up.if you must, read up to when some of the vengeance happens, and imagine a satisfying ending from there.Tl;dr: doesn't matter if you think it's good or not, around chapter 60~70 things start falling apart and turn into a badly scripted montage instead of a story.
