A Middle-aged Man Who Returned From Another World Becomes Unrivaled In The Apocalyptic World Chapter 22 Discussion

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  • #1
22 chapters in and the MC has gone to Home Depot and picked up some whiney brat hanger-on with a dime a dozen apocalypse survivor back-story. Spoiler

This brat happens to be a pretty 14-15 year old girl who's willing to throw herself at our 35 year old MC btw.

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This seems like it's being written as apocalypse survival but the MC is so strong there's no actual drama.
 
  • #4
I would like to know when you going to finish this book  love all your books that I read and can't wait for your new books to come out
 
  • #6
Please don’t make Charmine into a weak woman!!!!  The story was very captivating throughout the book until these last few chapters!   Charmines strong character is what got me immersed in this story, now I just see myself skimming over her weak character in front of Anthony!
 
  • #7
Very good story.  I really enjoyed it.
 
  • #8
Such a beautiful story. It's so sad when a person has experienced emotional trauma as it could maim him psychologically.  I could almost feel Riley's pain ... that is how good this author is! Though the title should have been through the eyes of his luna...  Nadia was the light throughout the story.
 
  • #10
I need to see how this all plays out. These men keep using Alice as a pawn. What is her connection to Madison’s father?
 
  • #11
Amazing story! Very well written with excellent character development.
 
  • #12
It's not a bad story I like the premise of the story. It does move a bit to fast. And I wish the writer gave  more details about the characters and the scenery. Paint a picture if you will. But good story.
 
  • #13
To avoid 1 star review, this author decided to write this (although the same warning has been written below).  Please do not purchase / read \"Chapter 53\" & \"Chapter\". Due to an error, those two merely repeated the previous chapter. Hence from Ch 52 please proceed to \"Chapter 53 (NEW)\" instead.
 
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