Reincarnated into a Game As the Hero’s Friend Chapter 23 part2 Discussion

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  • #1
I don't know about future story of this novel, but there a lot of useless sentences in what I read now.

For example:

Demons invade, all according to plot. 'Mob' protagonist starting move around and every time he go somewhere he will tell us about why 'adventure guild' isn't typical 'isekai adventure guild', because there no childs. 10 sentences. About each item in shop that made from demons. 2 items, both 10 sentence. About Nobel's ranks. Full chapter.

That a lot. And it really useless at this point of story.

If you think that '10 sentences' it's small number, then look, this review contains 17 sentences, including words below. And half of them contain only 2-5 words. Not like in the novel.

Maybe this is 'hidden' world building, but I don't care, I will forget this info anyway after a week or two.

Maybe this novel is good, because there some 4-5 stars review, but I don't have patience to wait for this good parts.

Have a good day, readers.
 
  • #5
Could not put this book down can’t wait to enjoy all the other book by this author.
 
  • #6
Looks like this book is gonna get whole lot more exciting
 
  • #7
Great book, I loved reading this! I cannot wait for the next one!
 
  • #9
why should she use gun ? she will just be nanny ..
 
  • #13
I really enjoyed this book, should have been a part 3
 
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