- #1
Okay so it is really interesting so far and p unique. The ML is tr*sh but we are searching for that so that's fine.The ML and FL barely know each other and have already had a child. Obvs it's only been 1 chapter but backdrop has been set. We've basically been given everything in the summary. It seems ML and FL will actually develop a bond instead of it magically happening, which is what I really want in these type of stories instead of "you left and I miss you and i've realised that I love you" because it adds a lot more depth and realness to the story.I will update this later but currently, it's had a strong start. A bit vague, but all beginnings are.
